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All Deviations

Better The Devil You Know by *peterdawes:iconpeterdawes:





rose petals upon piano keys
crimson sliding from ivory
dripping onto the floor
a stain that symbolizes
something permanent
that has become something
much more temporary
transient mortality
the death of more than desire

she trusted me once
sat beside me as mozart played upon
the keys beneath my fingertips
her body swaying to and fro
as though wrapped up in whimsy
i permitted myself a grin
because the angels never sense
the demons in their presence
never want to believe somebody
could be so cruel to them

what do they say?
better the devil you know.
she thought she knew me.
it only took a drop of wine
between her crimson lips
for her to smile a wicked smile
and become lost within the
melody of death's sonata
placed a hand upon my shoulder
and as she leaned in closely
i smelled her sweet perfume

parting from the music
to touch her long, brown hair
yes, she trusted me
and i, in turn, cared for her
however demons only know how
to destroy everything they touch
the tender kisses
placed upon her smooth skin
became rougher as two sides lobbied
for control over the man

did he love her or wish
to crush her
as he did everything else
was it the human who wished to taste her
or the devil sating his selfish whims
her lips parted in a tender moan
yes, she trusted me once
and, in turn, the predator smiled
and took hold of the reins
forgotten piano music
to a forgotten melody
that had once been the soundtrack
to their dance with one another

instead, the rose traced a path
across her satin flesh
before the sharp points
of porcelain daggers
embedded deep within her soul
the master she once trusted
became the demon depleting her
the soulless bastard i once was
replacing the saint i tried to be
did not rest until her humanity
became nothing more than the smoke
from a dying ember

i took from her and watched
the gothic princess i adored
close her eyes in death's repose.
smiled the devil's smile
as i licked my lips again.
and as i gazed upon the piano's keys,
i saw her hand placed upon the next chord
the next set of notes we'd been destined
to play together
crimson slipped out from her body
and coated the piano keys instead.

yes, she trusted me once.
she laid down her life for me.
and i merely took from her
before casting her away.
and as she slipped into decadence with me
i placed my hands upon the keys
and played the chorus of the cursed
the corner of my mouth
turned upward in a pleasant smile
better the devil you know, perhaps
but it would have been better
had she never known the devil at all.
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my submission for april 10th.

two sides to this poem. there is, of course, the obvious. a vampire exploiting a mortal's trust to sate his own desires. hence, the placement within horror.
however. . .
there is a much different message underlying.
is it a metaphor for exploiting the ones we love?
or perhaps. . .
symbolic of something personal for me?
perhaps a bit of guilt i still harbor today?

or does it say something different to the eye of the beholder?

for the record, i do not play piano. perhaps someday.
:blackrose:


thank you to dear *Sacrificed-Sanity for providing the preview image. :)
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*LeonieSainteVire:iconLeonieSainteVire: Apr 10, 2008, 8:55:48 AM
Your poem brings back memories of Jack...only Jack was not good...not kind...he would tell you so himself. He would not bother himself with such introspection.

Wonderful imagery.

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"I need no warrant for being, and no word of sanction upon my being. I am the warrant and the sanction."-Ayn Rand
*twilight-apple:icontwilight-apple: Apr 10, 2008, 9:49:51 AM
i used to play the piano, can still play when the mood strikes, but it hasn't in a couple of years. i do enough odd things, like crochet and cross stitch and read literature and do fun things with my parents.

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*denlm:icondenlm: Apr 10, 2008, 10:09:43 AM
I saw the metaphor immediately, and wish now you hadn't pointed it out to us yourself. I would have loved to feel smug a while longer. IMO, this is your best work to date, Peter. It blends your personal experiences with something we can all relate to: the devil within us who can kill the best around us if we let it. Bravo.
~HoldingBackTears:iconHoldingBackTears: Apr 10, 2008, 12:53:49 PM
You never cease to amaze me Peter. Very well done... but that's an understatement.

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~dark-dragon-wings:icondark-dragon-wings: Apr 11, 2008, 1:27:25 AM Mood: Love
peter play piano ???? pfttt lmao!! xD
me love this so so so much !!!!!! :heart:
its more dark then all lovey which is super good =D
Fav lines ^^ >"however demons only know how
to destroy everything they touch"
'smoke from a dying ember'

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You have know idea who your fucking with!
- Blade II
Dude stop thinking proper cop and start thinking play station! Lets blow some Shit up!!!
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*peterdawes:iconpeterdawes: Apr 11, 2008, 6:30:39 AM
I have been tempted, but haven't found the time yet. If there is anything I have, though, it is time. Someday, somewhere perhaps.

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"And the wild regrets and the bloody sweats
None knew so well as I:
That he who lives more lives than one,
More deaths than one shall die."
- Oscar Wilde
*peterdawes:iconpeterdawes: Apr 11, 2008, 6:48:33 AM
I debated pointing out the metaphor. Only did so for the sake of those not as discerning; however, one needs to trust their audience a bit as well.
Thank you, Denise. I was shockingly satisfied with this one when I completed it. I still see one or two words I'd like to adjust, but you all have approved of it. This would-be poet appreciates the comment and your favorite, dear.

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"And the wild regrets and the bloody sweats
None knew so well as I:
That he who lives more lives than one,
More deaths than one shall die."
- Oscar Wilde
*denlm:icondenlm: Apr 11, 2008, 7:07:59 AM
With total pleasure, my dark friend.
*peterdawes:iconpeterdawes: Apr 11, 2008, 10:11:34 AM
Neither would Flynn, once upon a time. Two sides of a man and neither side care for the other. Yet both remain inseparable.
Still, all of us possess the devil inside, don't we?

Thank you, Leonie. :blackrose: The favorite is humbling and an honor from you once again.

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"And the wild regrets and the bloody sweats
None knew so well as I:
That he who lives more lives than one,
More deaths than one shall die."
- Oscar Wilde
*peterdawes:iconpeterdawes: Apr 11, 2008, 10:12:03 AM
You are far too kind to me, dear. :) Thank you very much.

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"And the wild regrets and the bloody sweats
None knew so well as I:
That he who lives more lives than one,
More deaths than one shall die."
- Oscar Wilde