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i take a breath
inhaling deeper than
i ever have before.

scents which make
their way through
senses dulled.

revitalizing me
illuminating a
hazy consciousness.

flowing through
the passages into
the depths of my soul.

absorbed into
the system, expelled
as a wistful sigh.

the mind conjures
thoughts of who
i am, who i will

be, what to think
and how to feel.
unashamed, i am.

i take a breath
and feel the steady
cadence of my heart.

living within hope,
rising to the
forefront at last.
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ah, excellent. you can now submit directly into the gallery folder you wish? what shall they think of next? ;)

it has been a while, has it not?

i have a few random poems lying about i have composed recently. sharing them in case any of you wished to see. this one emerged after a bout of haiku penning and while they are not haiku themselves, the tenor was fairly different from my normal style.

:iconinyourroomplz:

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:iconmistraven:
yes DA has come a long way it seems although I can think of some other things they need to improve.

As for this piece I truly love it. It fits a part of how I feel sometimes.

Lovely to see your work again I for one am looking forward to seeing what more you had laying around

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~The Irony Of Life Is That, By The Time You're Old enough To Know Your Way Around, You're Not Going Anywhere Anymore ~
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:iconpeterdawes:
thank you very kindly, dear. :thanks: they do seem to have at least made some strides since i have last submitted work here, but i know how dA functions... for every problem solved, there are three which spring up in its wake. ;)

glad you enjoyed it. :hug: and thank you for the :+fav:.

--
:blackrose: peter w. dawes
bonded to my eternal maestro, *VictorMason
accomplice at *CrimsonMelodies
founder of #VampireWriters

"... forever yours, nocturnal me..."
:iconkakanina:
This is beautiful, I aspire to be able to write as well as this someday, *faves* :D

--
'Reality can destroy the dream,
Why shouldn't the dream destroy reality?'
George Moore

=RawEm0tion
:iconpeterdawes:
*chuckles* i am humbled you think this is worth aspiring toward. thank you very kindly. :thanks:

--
:blackrose: peter w. dawes
bonded to my eternal maestro, *VictorMason
accomplice at *CrimsonMelodies
founder of #VampireWriters

"... forever yours, nocturnal me..."
:iconkakanina:
You're very welcome, it truly is ^^

--
'Reality can destroy the dream,
Why shouldn't the dream destroy reality?'
George Moore

=RawEm0tion
:iconnighthawk81:
My mind's eye is an active one ... it sees images in all manner of work. In this, I see someone who has risen above their repression ... above their pain ... above their own view of themselves.

:yoda: "Impressed am I, my friend. Hope for your recovery I have, also."

--
Observations posted are just one more aspect of ...
... The Bird's-Eye View.
-- Nighthawk --
Poet, Author, Seeker of Truth and Beauty, Follower of Jesus Christ.
:iconmistraven:
welcome love
lol so true about DA :hug:

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~The Irony Of Life Is That, By The Time You're Old enough To Know Your Way Around, You're Not Going Anywhere Anymore ~
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:iconfrisca-freak:
I really like this, it seems almost dreamlike. :)

It was a nice to see some of your work in my inbox again, I hope to read more soon. ^^

--
"A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men." - Roald Dahl

My Poe Project here
:iconfrisca-freak:
Nice surprise, sorry. ^^;

--
"A little nonsense now and then is relished by the wisest men." - Roald Dahl

My Poe Project here

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