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Dark Dance With an Assassin by =peterdawes:iconpeterdawes:





the chill of death looms heavy in the air.

a shuffle of footsteps on wet city pavement.
fresh rain, a pervasive odor in the air;
i follow you, at something of a distance
and yet, i know you can sense the shiver
running up and down your spine.

this is what i live for.
adrenaline; liquid poison,
fueling the hunt for the hunter;
fueling the cravings of the assassin.

tension builds as your back straightens,
as my lit cigarette finds its way into a gutter
swimming downstream with the other things
smart enough to know to run.
unlike you. you continue down this street with me.

fingers touch the sword’s hilt
as though a musician
warming up for the grand concerto,
preparing the next act of the opera.

something causes you to stop walking.
truth forming fissures on denial at long last?
i duck into the shadows, sword by my side
so the moon’s pale light does not cast a glow
upon the sharpened steel i caress just like a lover.

and like a lover, i seek
to offer ministrations to the passions
i serve as a willing servant;
to the inner demons which hold me captive.

you resume walking as though indifferent,
but i can smell the fear from where i’m standing
and it only grows in potency the closer i come
to you, my unfortunate target.
a dance with the devil awaits as i near you.

fear, a tempting perfume
invading my senses, nearly causing me
to pause and savor its aroma,
but better things are yet to come.

two hand closing around the sword’s hilt.
two arms raising; shoulders square, the posture
taught to me when i was yet a neophyte
elbows bent, eyes set upon you, readying myself
to deliver the fatal blow at last. waiting for one thing.

my fangs taste the wind;
my senses prepare themselves
for the scent i favor the most
filling the night air; running down the streets.

i scuff a shoe on purpose. you turn and face me.
eyes wide, no time to react. metal piercing flesh;
piercing muscle, piercing body, impaling you;
slicing through you as though you were little more
than blood being held inside a container of air.

crimson red, the assassin’s color
pouring out like rivers of
endless pleasure; endless decadence
forming pools intermixing with puddles.

you drop to your knees, looking upward
regarding the face of your killer as he flicks your blood
from his blade and smiles the devil’s smile.
no remorse, no regret, just pure satisfaction.
he bids you go to sleep and you have no choice but to obey.

another body; another soul
another notch upon an already long belt.
the killer strolls into the darkness,
his black heart all the more vile.

the chill of death passes with the blood spilled in my wake.
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Author's Comments

was glancing through my poetry folder and noticed this. do not think i submitted it yet. (or, at least, i could not find it in my folders. correct me if i am mistaken.)
a lovely evening for a murder, don't you think? ;)
:blackrose:

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:iconunenchantedgirl:
fear, a tempting perfume
invading my senses, nearly causing me
to pause and savor its aroma,
but better things are yet to come.




Wonderful.
:iconerilisvampyre:
No, this has not been seen until now...
...and what masterpiece it is.
A brilliant movement of death, darkness and blood.

--
~ That is not dead which can eternal lie
And with strange aeons even death may die. ~
:iconphantomthiefvier:
"i scuff a shoe on purpose. you turn and face me.
eyes wide, no time to react. metal piercing flesh;
piercing muscle, piercing body, impaling you;
slicing through you as though you were little more
than blood being held inside a container of air."

so vivid this sent shivers down my spine.

--
"what do we want?"
"BRAAINS!"
"When do we want them?"
"BRAAINS!"
*facepalm*
:heart::blackrose::tea::blackrose::heart:
:iconanimadellarosa:
Every word has taken me along this assassin's journey.
Very riveting and powerful, Peter! Bravo! :clap:

By the way, I have a Katana sword and a few others.. :D

--
There is in every true woman's heart a spark of heavenly fire which lies dormant in the broad daylight of prosperity, but which kindles up, beams and blazes in the dark hour of adversity.
:iconalways-try:
Very dark and chilling.
I love the detailed description and feeling of the piece.

--
'Why so serious?'

Check out RawEm0tion [link]

Simon:Amy's likes include Kelly Osbourne and the smell of petrol. I quite like matches, let's do lunch.
:iconpaintedbluerose:
I love the "liquid posion" and "crimson red, an assassin's color" lines. Very nice. They seem to stand out more; more imagary.

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When I see you, I smile. When you talk, I'm speechless. When you walk, I stare. What can I say... retards amuse me. :)
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You’re like our brother. :no: Step brother. :no: Weird kid down the street who eats nothing but mayonnaise on saltines. :nod:
:icongraveyardsickness:
whoa.so.awesome.....i like it...so much blood

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" I hope that when the world comes to an end, I can breathe a sigh of relief, because I know there will be so much to look forward to." - Donnie Darko
:iconlosingmyfaith:
I think it would be more powerful shorter, but I also think it's a great poem. It could work both long and short, so. Good job :)

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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
:iconobsidian-siren:
F L Y N N????? Need I say more. *winks*

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"passion éternel, désir feu sauvage"

:heart: :blackrose: :heart: :rose: :heart: :blackrose: :heart:

"When moonlight crawls along the street
Chasing away the summer heat
Footsteps outside somewhere below
The world revolves I let it go"

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