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All Deviations


my apologies
love
but
i did not know
the fire in
your eyes
could melt a cold
winter's
evening
for
if i had
i would have
forsaken
the wood
and the stove
in favor of
seeking warmth
inside
your arms

my apologies
love
but
i did not know
that destiny
in all its strange
beautiful
chaos
could bring me
closer
to knowing
myself
than knowing
myself
could

my apologies
love
but
i looked into
your eyes
and saw
forever
staring back
at me
i saw the future
in your hands
i saw the life
that only
more deserving
beings
receive
presented
to me
through
you

i cannot help
myself
if i take you
by storm
and whisk
you away
into another place
into another time
i cannot help
myself
for it was there
in your eyes
when i dreamed of
tomorrow
and saw you
standing there

my apologies
love
but
you will have
to accept
the fact
that i will be
beside you
always
until the end
of time
for i have bound
myself
to you
and you have bound
yourself
to me.

interconnected
hearts
intertwined.
forgive me
for such
brash
bold
impetuous
behavior.
but i saw
tomorrow
in you
and wish
to pull you
from tomorrow
into
today.
©2008 *peterdawes
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a commissioned poem, although i could certainly express such a sentiment to my beloved as well.
i cannot tell you who commissioned it. many of you know him.
he says he composes thoughts better in eighths and quarter notes than into words.
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*twilight-apple:icontwilight-apple: Apr 28, 2008, 8:41:15 PM
so, someone who thinks in music. i'll have to ponder some more.

interconnected hearts intertwined. awwwww, so pretty. *wiping away a tear*

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lindsay e. :plotting:
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~Zer0Hawke:iconZer0Hawke: Apr 29, 2008, 5:07:05 AM
Beautiful ^_^ I like it

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*denlm:icondenlm: Apr 29, 2008, 6:46:25 AM
Wow, if this is who I think it is... just wow. Though I saw Monica throughout it too. Can you ever really separate her from anything you write?
~reanna-banana:iconreanna-banana: Apr 29, 2008, 7:51:40 AM
very nice. i love the format. (is that the word? words are escaping me today. >.<;)
i'm probably not intelligent or clued in enough to figure out who it is you comissioned it for, but i think i may have an idea...
but i saw
tomorrow
in you
and wish
to pull you
from tomorrow
into
today.

i loved that. i dont knwo why. those few lines just hit me harder then the rest of them ;P

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kellsie-reanne.

* never satisfied if i couldn't see those eyes...
~HoldingBackTears:iconHoldingBackTears: May 1, 2008, 2:02:23 PM
wonderful!

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*peterdawes:iconpeterdawes: May 2, 2008, 2:25:26 PM
Yes, he is quite musically inclined and I was obliged to assist him. Perhaps he might compose a bit of piano music for me and my beloved in return.

Thank you, Lindsay. :)

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None knew so well as I:
That he who lives more lives than one,
More deaths than one shall die."
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*peterdawes:iconpeterdawes: May 2, 2008, 2:25:39 PM
Thank you very much. :)

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"And the wild regrets and the bloody sweats
None knew so well as I:
That he who lives more lives than one,
More deaths than one shall die."
- Oscar Wilde
*peterdawes:iconpeterdawes: May 2, 2008, 2:27:18 PM
Never. "The muse" is a very nebulous entity, but takes its cues from her memory.
It is quite possibly who you are thinking of. *grins*

I am playing nice. See?

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"And the wild regrets and the bloody sweats
None knew so well as I:
That he who lives more lives than one,
More deaths than one shall die."
- Oscar Wilde
*peterdawes:iconpeterdawes: May 2, 2008, 2:28:23 PM
You could say that the commissioner was another friend of my co-conspirator's. :)
Thank you, Kellsie-Reanne. :blackrose:

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"And the wild regrets and the bloody sweats
None knew so well as I:
That he who lives more lives than one,
More deaths than one shall die."
- Oscar Wilde